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The image is of a bar wich not located near our hotel.
Leisurely=rauhallinen, kiireetön Sidewalk=jalkakäytävä Curb=kadunvarsi Helpful=avulias Homeless=koditon Describe=kuvailla Opportunity=tilaisuus Entertaining=huvittava, hauska Pickpocket=taskuvaras Money belt=rahavyö
By:Pauliina Kääriäinen 09D
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Well described, not too much of just telling things and things proceeded logically. I liked it because you described well and it gave a good idea of what kind of place it is. Maybe you could have described a bit more places. Nice picture of the city but maybe you could have put more pictures, like a picture of the beach for example. Just a few mistakes and those could easily be fixed
Comment by Joakim November 18, 2009 @ 10:42 amContents: Good
You had some splendid details in there, especially when describing the noise on the streets. However, you need to work on structure (beginning, middle and end) and conjunctions (however, despite the fact that, nevertheless, finally etc.) to keep the text fluent. Paragraphs and a mind map help a lot!
Media / appearance: Very good
Caption = which was not located
I’m not sure what the picture has to do with the text, did you like that place or what?
Grammar: Satisfactory
Comment by Ms Leino December 8, 2009 @ 10:52 am- a money belt because of pickpockets
- saw cats and dogs a couple of times (SPOTPA)
- THERE WERE lots of young people
- swarmed WITH
- there YOU can find
- IN the evening