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I love Cyprus by minnipauliina
November 11, 2009, 10:54 am
Filed under: Greece
 I visited Cyprus, Agia Napa,  last summer. I was there with my lovely parents  two leisurely weeks. My dad used money belt for pickpockets. It was so hot every day, except  couple loudly day. I burnt myself a couple of times, but luckily not so badly. The ocean was very salty, but water was warm and nice.  On the sidewalk I saw couple times homeless cats and dogs, it was very sad. Food was great and the menu many-sided. I don´t understand how the waiters can wear black suits. In Agia Napa was lots of young people. Roads swarmed young people’s hired vehicles, what makes loud noise. On curbs are lots of different shopping streets, there founds almost all well known brands, but there are also nice local shops. Locals were  helpful and service was good. Our four stars hotel was situated on the beach and it was great, everyday there was different entertaining opportunities hole day and special show on the evening. Nature of the Cyprus is quit rough, there is little vegetation. It caused because there is only few rainy days. If  I should describe Cyprus, I will say it is very warm place.

YABBA NABBA

The image is of a bar wich not located near our hotel.

 Leisurely=rauhallinen, kiireetön                                                                                                                                                         Sidewalk=jalkakäytävä                                                                                                                                                                                     Curb=kadunvarsi                                                                                                                                                                                  Helpful=avulias                                                                                                                                                                             Homeless=koditon                                                                                                                                                                                 Describe=kuvailla                                                                                                                                                                            Opportunity=tilaisuus                                                                                                                                                                           Entertaining=huvittava, hauska                                                                                                                                                      Pickpocket=taskuvaras                                                                                                                                                                                    Money belt=rahavyö

By:Pauliina Kääriäinen 09D

 


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Well described, not too much of just telling things and things proceeded logically. I liked it because you described well and it gave a good idea of what kind of place it is. Maybe you could have described a bit more places. Nice picture of the city but maybe you could have put more pictures, like a picture of the beach for example. Just a few mistakes and those could easily be fixed

Comment by Joakim

Contents: Good
You had some splendid details in there, especially when describing the noise on the streets. However, you need to work on structure (beginning, middle and end) and conjunctions (however, despite the fact that, nevertheless, finally etc.) to keep the text fluent. Paragraphs and a mind map help a lot!

Media / appearance: Very good
Caption = which was not located
I’m not sure what the picture has to do with the text, did you like that place or what?

Grammar: Satisfactory
- a money belt because of pickpockets
- saw cats and dogs a couple of times (SPOTPA)
- THERE WERE lots of young people
- swarmed WITH
- there YOU can find
- IN the evening

Comment by Ms Leino




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